Introducing Myself
Hello, my name is Hafis Gamas Saputra and you can call me Hafis. I was born in Banjarnegara,17 February 2000. Now I live in Kuningan, and becoming a student of English Language Education in Yogyakarta State University. My hobbies are watching a movie or a TV series or an anime, listening to music, and playing games. I am kinda good at computer stuff and I think there is nothing unique with me. I think that's all from me.
your introduction is easy to understand but I want to underline the word "i" and "thing" in the sentence "I am kinda good at computer stuff and i thing....", "I" should be in capital, and "thing" it should be "think" not "thing"
ReplyDeleteThanks for the comment I didn't realize that.
DeleteIn my opinion your introduction is short but clear enough. But I think the line 3 has 2 different points. Maybe you can make it into 2 different sentences.
ReplyDeleteWhich part ?
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