Sunday, 14 October 2018
9 PM
Dear diary
Today my friend came to visit me. He said he came to study for his mid semester test. When he arrived, the first thing that he did wasn't studying, but telling me that he was hungry, so we went to Sunmor to find something to eat. After we ate some food we went back to my room. I thought he would start studying right after we arrived, but he doesn't. He said that he felt so sleepy and then he slept. When my friend was sleeping, I started to watch a TV series called Stranger Thing. After I watched three episodes of it, my friend woke up and started to study. After I finished the series, I saw him still studying and then I remembered that I still had some assignments. So while he was studying I was working on my assignments, sometimes if we were tired we start talking about something and if the topic ended, we continued our own activity. When I wrote this diary he was still here, studying for his mid semester test.
Hafis
What a nice diary, but I think you should give a "tab" before the word "today" to show a good paragraph. And foreign words other than English should be underlined or italicized.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the advice
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ReplyDeleteI think your friend is tired 😂
ReplyDeleteSorry, but I don't know which part that I should give a comment. 😁
Yeah, maybe he just tired. It's ok
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