That's a simple postcard, but I like it. You give a short information but the contents are quite representative. I think you can give more information about Yogyakarta for example about the culture, places you've visited, activites that you do in Yogyakarta, etc. It will be good if you put comma after 'Hi everyone' and 'See you soon'.
Thanks for the information, but is it necessary to put commas there ? Because I didn't see any comas in that part of a postcard in the example of pdf file that ma'am Suci gave us.
That's a simple postcard, but I like it. You give a short information but the contents are quite representative. I think you can give more information about Yogyakarta for example about the culture, places you've visited, activites that you do in Yogyakarta, etc. It will be good if you put comma after 'Hi everyone' and 'See you soon'.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the information, but is it necessary to put commas there ? Because I didn't see any comas in that part of a postcard in the example of pdf file that ma'am Suci gave us.
Deleteyou do not have to put comma but it'll better if you put comma.
Deleteoh, okay. Thanks for the advice
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