28 Oct, 2018
Dear Aji,
I just heard the news! Congratulation on the economic debate at UNESA! I heard that you won the second place. It is a great achievement. Since you are a new student at UNS. Keep Fighting
See you soon.
Your Friend,
Hafis
what a short and clear letter! I Think you should combine sentences "It is a great achievement" and "Since you are a new student at UNS". But Actually you have a good structure in your letter.
ReplyDeleteHow to combine it? By using a comma?
DeleteIt is a good personal letter ☺
ReplyDeleteI think you just need to add a comma (,) after 'your friend'.
Oh I see, I forget about that. Thanks for the advice
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